Jonny Cuba - Revision history

Murgh: sp

2025-12-01T17:29:44Z

Cholmondely: Tagged as Real Person

2024-04-16T08:47:03Z

Tagged as Real Person

Cholmondely: Added a little more

2022-06-28T12:25:55Z

Added a little more

Murgh: Some merciless copyediting of my essay there: some good, some changed too much of the meaning. –Scoring=what composers do.

2022-03-01T18:24:07Z

Some merciless copyediting of my essay there: some good, some changed too much of the meaning. –Scoring=what composers do.

Uk Eliter: /* Scoring */. I have tried to improve the English and tried to make the sense more apparent. Question: 'scoring'?

2022-03-01T13:31:14Z

‎Scoring: . I have tried to improve the English and tried to make the sense more apparent. Question: 'scoring'?

Uk Eliter: /* Oolite whisperer */ I have had the temerity to improve the English and to add some polish. Here's a question. A 'drinking establishment with a name leaving little doubt of its customary clientele': how so? And is it always the same establishment?

2022-03-01T13:25:31Z

‎Oolite whisperer: I have had the temerity to improve the English and to add some polish. Here's a question. A 'drinking establishment with a name leaving little doubt of its customary clientele': how so? And is it always the same establishment?

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2022-01-08T20:14:01Z

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Murgh: elab

2022-01-07T00:03:53Z

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Murgh: sp

2022-01-06T23:39:47Z

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2021-12-28T11:00:22Z

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 ==Scoring==
-More commonly known than the accounts of Jonny Cuba's influence is the music that he wrote. The perpetual musical score that sweeps through the salons of the [[hOopy Casino]]es has become lodged within the heads of many a creature. The composition is even harder to forget after one has witnessed it being performed by the holograms of "Jonny Cuba & the Fierce Frogs".
+More commonly known than the accounts of Jonny Cuba's influence is the music that he wrote. The perpetual musical score that sweeps through the salons of the [[hOopy Casino]]s has become lodged within the heads of many a creature. The composition is even harder to forget after one has witnessed it being performed by the holograms of "Jonny Cuba & the Fierce Frogs".
 ==OXP's==

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		+	[[Category:Real People]]

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	==Scoring==		==Scoring==
	More commonly known than the accounts of Jonny Cuba's influence is the music that he wrote. The perpetual musical score that sweeps through the salons of the [[hOopy Casino]]es has become lodged within the heads of many a creature. The composition is even harder to forget after one has witnessed it being performed by the holograms of "Jonny Cuba & the Fierce Frogs".		More commonly known than the accounts of Jonny Cuba's influence is the music that he wrote. The perpetual musical score that sweeps through the salons of the [[hOopy Casino]]es has become lodged within the heads of many a creature. The composition is even harder to forget after one has witnessed it being performed by the holograms of "Jonny Cuba & the Fierce Frogs".
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		+	==OXP's==
		+	:''Contributions, appearances, etc.''
		+	*[[Personalities OXP]]:
		+	"personalities-jonnycuba" = {
		+	insurance = 750;
		+	name = "Jonny Cuba";
		+	"random_seed" = "0 0 0 0 0 0";
		+	"short_description" = "a fat blue slimy frog";
		+	};
		+	*[[Zorg Racing]]
		+	*[[hOopy Casino]]

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 ==Oolite whisperer==
 Oftentimes Jonny Cuba was to be found slouched on a stool, pushing his burly shoulders against the moderate G-force of a sticky bar surface, in a drinking establishment with a name leaving little doubt of its customary clientele. Barely moving, and gazing through narrow slits framed by heavily folded eyelids, one could assume that here was another soul lost in oblivion, but that would be a mistake, because Jonny Cuba missed nothing.
-He noticed immediately the then-unknown, newcomer [[User:Aegidian|Aegidian]] as the latter shyly entered through the door. This Aegidian was clutching, awkwardly, a computer interface and some paper folders, and trying to orient himself to the unfamiliar setting. Quietly he made his way to a little table in the back. All of a sudden, Jonny Cuba was sat at the adjacent table, in the same motionless posture as before. One could perceive, barely, that his eyes were fixed to the edge of their narrow slits, closely observing the newcomer.
+He noticed immediately the then-unknown, newcomer [[User:Aegidian|Aegidian]] as the latter shyly entered through the door. This Aegidian was awkwardly clutching a computer interface and some paper folders, and trying to orient himself to the unfamiliar setting. Quietly he made his way to a little table in the back. Though no one had seen him move, Jonny Cuba was suddenly sat at the adjacent table, in the same motionless posture as before. One could perceive, barely, that his eyes were fixed to the edge of their narrow slits, closely observing the newcomer.
-Henceforth Jonny Cuba was there whenever the tenderfoot techie Aegidian was. Whenever Aegidian leaned back from his terminal and looked over one of his shoulders, theexpressionless mystery man was present and, though it was impossible to say with certainty, seemingly studying him closely. Somehow the techie grew to feel that this man was in tune with the work on his screen. A sigh, or a growl, for instance, could be heard at moments when the timing relative to Aegidian’s keystrokes seemed too fitting to be coincidental. And at the very moment of completing some operation successfully on his interface, he would hear a deep rumble that sounded like, "Mmm, good".
+Henceforth Jonny Cuba was there whenever the tenderfoot techie Aegidian was. Whenever Aegidian leaned back from his terminal and looked over one of his shoulders, the expressionless mystery man was present and, though it was impossible to say with certainty, seemingly studying him closely. Somehow the techie grew to feel that this man was in tune with the work on his screen. A sigh, or a growl, for instance, could be heard at moments when the timing relative to Aegidian’s keystrokes seemed too fitting to be coincidental. And at the very moment of completing some operation successfully on his interface, he would hear a deep rumble that sounded like, "Mmm, good".
-And so it was, that while Aegidian never really knew how far the nearby presence comprehended work, he found comfort in the grunts of approval, and eventually came to think of the other man as a kind of muse.
+And so it was, that while Aegidian never really knew how far the nearby, hefty presence comprehended his work, he found comfort in the grunts of approval, and eventually came to think of the other man as a kind of spiritual muse.
-There are reports that others, too, experienced the effect of the apparitional nearby presence. The young [[User:Murgh|Murgh]] found in that presence a similar mysterious source of subtle encouragement, and perhaps manipulation, even to the extent that, with time, Jonny Cuba became an advisor and even a confidant of sorts.
+There are reports that others, too, experienced the effect of the apparitional nearby presence. The young [[User:Murgh|Murgh]] found in that company a similar mysterious source of subtle encouragement, and perhaps manipulation, to the extent that with time, Jonny Cuba became an advisor and even a confidant of sorts.
 [[File:JC&tff.jpg|thumb|right|320px|Promotion of the eternal gig of Jonny Cuba & The Fierce Frogs.]]
-Eventually it became known that Jonny Cuba was an accomplished musician, and with that revelation some of the mystery died.
+Eventually it became known that Jonny Cuba was an accomplished musician, and some of the mystery died.
 ==Scoring==
-Better known that the subtle intellectual influence worked by Jonny Cuba is the music that he wrote. That music sweeps continually through the salons of the [[hOopy Casino]]es. It has become lodged within the heads of many a creature. The composition is even harder to forget after one has witnessed it being performed. It is performed by holograms going by the name ‘Jonny Cuba & the Fierce Frogs’.
+More commonly known than the accounts of Jonny Cuba's influence is the music that he wrote. The perpetual musical score that sweeps through the salons of the [[hOopy Casino]]es has become lodged within the heads of many a creature. The composition is even harder to forget after one has witnessed it being performed by the holograms of "Jonny Cuba & the Fierce Frogs".

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	==Scoring==		==Scoring==
−	~~More widely recounted than~~ the ~~tales of his~~ influence, the ~~perpetual musical score~~ that sweeps through the salons of the [[hOopy Casino]]es ~~became a tune stuck to~~ the heads of many ~~creatures~~. The composition is even ~~less probably forgotten when~~ it ~~witnessed in performance~~ by the ~~holograms of Jonny~~ Cuba & the Fierce ~~Frogs~~.	+	Better known that the subtle intellectual influence worked by Jonny Cuba is the music that he wrote. That music sweeps continually through the salons of the [[hOopy Casino]]es. It has become lodged within the heads of many a creature. The composition is even harder to forget after one has witnessed it being performed. It is performed by holograms going by the name ‘Jonny Cuba & the Fierce Frogs’.

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	There are reports that others, too, experienced the effect of his apparitional nearby presence. The young [[User:Murgh\|Murgh]] found in him a similar mysterious source of subtle encouragement, and perhaps manipulation, who with time became an advisory figure and trusted confidant.		There are reports that others, too, experienced the effect of his apparitional nearby presence. The young [[User:Murgh\|Murgh]] found in him a similar mysterious source of subtle encouragement, and perhaps manipulation, who with time became an advisory figure and trusted confidant.
		+	[[File:JC&tff.jpg\|thumb\|right\|320px\|Promotion of the eternal gig of Jonny Cuba & The Fierce Frogs.]]

	It eventually became known that Jonny Cuba was an accomplished musician, and some of the mystery died.		It eventually became known that Jonny Cuba was an accomplished musician, and some of the mystery died.

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-The space-denizen '''Jonny Cuba''' would often be found slouched on a stool, pushing his burly shoulders against the moderate G force of a sticky bar surface, in a drinking establishment with a name leaving little doubt of its customary clientele. Barely moving, and gazing through narrow slits framed by heavily folded eyelids, one could make the assumption that here was another soul lost in oblivion, but that would be a mistake, because Jonny Cuba missed nothing.
+The space-denizen '''Jonny Cuba''' was long considered an enigmatic personage.
 He noticed immediately the then-unknown, newcomer [[User:Aegidian|Aegidian]] as he shyly entered through the door, awkwardly clutching a computer interface and some paper folders, and attempting to orient himself to the unfamiliar setting before courteously making his way to a little table in the back. Though nobody had seen him move, Jonny Cuba was sat at the adjacent table, in the same motionless posture, his eyes, one could barely perceive, fixed to the side of his narrow slits, closely observing the newcomer.
-Henceforth he would always seem to be there, when the tenderfoot techie Aegidian leaned back from his terminal and looked over one of his shoulders, this expressionless mystery man was present, impossible to say with certainty, but most likely studying him closely. Somehow he grew to feel this man was in tune to the work on his screen. A sigh, or a growl, for example, could be heard at moments when its timing relative to the events of his keystrokes seemed too fitting to be coincidental. And then, at the moment of a successful completion on his interface, he would hear in a deep rumble, "Mmm, good".
+Henceforth he would always seem to be there, when the tenderfoot techie Aegidian leaned back from his terminal and looked over one of his shoulders, this expressionless mystery man was present, impossible to say with certainty, but most likely studying him closely. Somehow he grew to feel this man was in tune to the work on his screen. A sigh, or a growl, for instance, could be heard at moments when its timing relative to the events of his keystrokes seemed too fitting to be coincidental. And then, at the very moment of a successful completed operation on his interface, he would hear in a deep rumble, "Mmm, good".
 And so it was, that while Aegidian never had a sense of to what degree the hefty presence nearby had any comprehension of his work, he found comfort in the grunts of approval, and eventually came to think of him as a spiritual muse.
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 It eventually became known that Jonny Cuba was an accomplished musician, and some of the mystery died.

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−	The space-denizen '''~~Johny~~ Cuba''' would often be found slouched on a stool, pushing his burly shoulders against the moderate G force of a sticky bar surface, in a drinking establishment with a name leaving little doubt of its customary clientele. Barely moving, and gazing through narrow slits framed by heavily folded eyelids, one could make the assumption that here was another soul lost in oblivion, but that would be a mistake, because Jonny Cuba missed nothing.	+	The space-denizen '''Jonny Cuba''' would often be found slouched on a stool, pushing his burly shoulders against the moderate G force of a sticky bar surface, in a drinking establishment with a name leaving little doubt of its customary clientele. Barely moving, and gazing through narrow slits framed by heavily folded eyelids, one could make the assumption that here was another soul lost in oblivion, but that would be a mistake, because Jonny Cuba missed nothing.

	He noticed immediately the then-unknown, newcomer [[User:Aegidian\|Aegidian]] as he shyly entered through the door, awkwardly clutching a computer interface and some paper folders, and attempting to orient himself to the unfamiliar setting before courteously making his way to a little table in the back. Though nobody had seen him move, Jonny Cuba was sat at the adjacent table, in the same motionless posture, his eyes, one could barely perceive, fixed to the side of his narrow slits, closely observing the newcomer.		He noticed immediately the then-unknown, newcomer [[User:Aegidian\|Aegidian]] as he shyly entered through the door, awkwardly clutching a computer interface and some paper folders, and attempting to orient himself to the unfamiliar setting before courteously making his way to a little table in the back. Though nobody had seen him move, Jonny Cuba was sat at the adjacent table, in the same motionless posture, his eyes, one could barely perceive, fixed to the side of his narrow slits, closely observing the newcomer.