Um... the stuff about Marlin, where was that sourced from? Also, you haven't made mention of the genocide in Achenar which is (I believe) the original impetus for the attempted Federal invasion. I could be utterly wrong, of course... --22.214.171.124
The Marlin stuff is sourced from the Frontier Gazetteer entry on Achenar, with a little bit of fluff made up on the spur of the moment to give it a bit more depth.
I did mention the genocide, although in hindsight maybe it isn't clear: "When population growth heralded the need for terraforming of other planets in the Achenar system in 2314, Henson Duval authorised the sterilisation of Achenar 6d in preparation for terraforming. This act enraged the Federation, who threatened to retaliate if actions such as this were to be repeated."
I might expand it a little. In fact, yes, I'll do it once I finish typing this.--Selezen 12:16, 6 February 2006 (UTC)